📚🧑‍🦰Slow Renga (40) Wednesday 🧑‍🦰📚

#slow #renga #Wednesday

Bittersweet/Crowded Train

No. 1
bittersweet
your smile, my tears,
nostalgia 

No. 2
crowded train
hot weather, human sweat,
platform fresh air

No. 3
bittersweet
love and lies, final
betrayal

No. 4
crowded train
ear-buds sending music
to the brain

No. 5
bittersweet,
the taste of revenge
leaves you cold

No. 6
crowded train
strap hanging, avoiding eyes
and conversation


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