What a clogyrnach is
- Origin: A traditional Welsh syllabic form, part of the classic 24 Welsh meters.
- Stanza length: Usually 1 or more stanzas, each of 5 or 6 lines.
- Feel: The lines get shorter as you go, so the stanza “tightens,” giving a sense of gathering focus or punchline.
Basic structure
For a 6-line stanza, the usual pattern is:
- Line 1: 8 syllables — rhyme a
- Line 2: 8 syllables — rhyme a
- Line 3: 5 syllables — rhyme b
- Line 4: 5 syllables — rhyme b
- Line 5: 3 syllables — rhyme b
- Line 6: 3 syllables — rhyme a
So the rhyme scheme is:
- a a b b b a
You can also combine lines 5 and 6 into one 6-syllable line, keeping the internal rhyme:
- Line 5: 6 syllables, with b somewhere in the middle and a at the end
(so it still sounds like b…a)
That gives you a 5-line version.
How to write one (step by step)
- Choose your two rhymes.
- a-rhyme: will appear in lines 1, 2, and 6 (or end of line 5 if you combine).
- b-rhyme: will appear in lines 3, 4, and 5.
- Draft line 1 (8 syllables, a-rhyme).
- Tell us the scene, mood, or statement.
- Count syllables carefully.
- Write line 2 (8 syllables, a-rhyme).
- Develop or twist the idea from line 1.
- Same end rhyme as line 1.
- Write lines 3 and 4 (5 syllables each, b-rhyme).
- These often narrow the focus, add detail, or shift tone.
- Both end with the b-rhyme.
- Write line 5 (3 syllables, b-rhyme).
- Short, sharp—can feel like a little drumbeat.
- Write line 6 (3 syllables, a-rhyme).
- A tiny “turn” back to the original rhyme—often a punchline, twist, or echo.
- Repeat the stanza pattern if you want a longer poem—each stanza follows the same syllable and rhyme rules.
A simple example
Here’s a quick clogyrnach I’ll tailor to you and poetry:
Draft:
- Old words in candlelight glow (8, a)
- you weigh each line, then let it go (8, a)
- a fox in the mind (5, b)
- tracks verse, tail entwined (5, b)
- soft find (3, b)
- of glow (3, a)
You can hear how the stanza “tightens” as it goes—long lines, then medium, then those tiny last beats.
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