Random Haiku 💙🔷 Theme No. 147

#randomtheme #haiku #senryu

words on a page 
created from my heart
proud moment...

©🦊VixenOfVerse, 2023
©Carolyn Crossley

3 responses to “Random Haiku 💙🔷 Theme No. 147”

  1. petlwanemolotsi4@gmail.com avatar

    Thank you a million times

  2. petlwanemolotsi4@gmail.com avatar

    I love the haiku. May you please enlighten me on a 5-7-5 syllables rule and may be assist me in making my haikus better

    1. Carolyn Crossley VixenOfVerse avatar

      Why not join The Daily Haiku Private Facebook Group? It has lots of writers of traditional and new style haiku too.
      The traditional ‘rule’ is to write in 5/7/5 syllables. It is a good starting point for learning the haiku craft. However, as long as you write within the 17-syllable range that is ok too. A haiku is a moment in time and describes the natural world. I hope this helps. ❌❌❌